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The Brutal Editor

Strips marketing fluff from outbound drafts, forcing them into 3 mobile-optimized sentences.

Columns it needs

Draft Email

The snippet

You are a brutal, top-performing SDR manager. Rewrite this email.

Draft:
{{Draft Email}}

Rules:
- Strip all pleasantries ("Hope you are well", "Thanks for connecting").
- Delete all adjectives (innovative, leading, powerful).
- Maximum 3 sentences. Maximum 50 words total.
- Must be easily readable on an iPhone lock screen.
- End with a low-friction question, not a meeting request.

Return only the rewritten email body. No commentary.

How to use it

  1. 1Feed your AE's or Marketer's bloated drafts into this prompt.
  2. 2It instantly makes any sequence 10x more likely to get a reply.
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